Espina_Vidal_Li_Jennifer_Final_Cover Up

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Overall very interesting -- VO with the texting at the same time is moving toward being somewhat experimental. Effective way to handle the problems of internal/external worlds merging. Great you kept everything subtle -- lighting, camera work, music -- instead of hitting us over the head. This makes the ending more of an intense climax.

EDITING
Editing is slow in some places. For example. when she gets dressed for the gym we don't need to see the whole time she is changing. Intercut some closeups and speed that up. It isn't integral to the plot so it doesn't need so much time. Though overall the pacing is good.

CINEMATOGRAPHY
Need more variation in your shot types, but you know that. You did a good job overcoming your footage loss.

COLOR
Color needs some work. Still looks grey and low contrast. Did you shoot log/raw? If you don't have time/skills to CC, it is a good idea to shoot with an easier profile. This goes back to the convo about balancing quality with time/budget. It's always important to weigh your skills/budget/time/weight requirements when choosing gear/shooting specs. (When I work only as a DP, I will shoot raw or log because post is not my problem. If I am shooting a low budget job where I am also editing I make it easy on myself and shoot log or even a camera profile...)

Also, night shot in bed just looks like the same lighting but darkened in post. This is a good time to do, for example, some back/edge lighting with a blue filter, or a low very orange lamp by the bed. Night time isn't just darker -- the light is actually different, coming from different angles and sources. You want to make a contrast between day and night, with day being this very soft bouncy light, and night being more moody and traditionally low key.

Overall a great solution to the chamber assignment. Congratulations on a job well done.

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